Comments for Tobiasdust's Weblog http://tobiasdust.wordpress.com Toby's blog about "Heat and Dust" Thu, 19 Jun 2008 11:50:45 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Key Scenes In Gandhi by dorotheedust http://tobiasdust.wordpress.com/2008/06/19/key-scenes-in-gandhi/#comment-9 dorotheedust Thu, 19 Jun 2008 11:50:45 +0000 http://tobiasdust.wordpress.com/?p=27#comment-9 Nice work Toby! I am definetly impressed how clearly you remember the facts and how you present them! As I have pretty much chosen the same scenes I completely agree with you choise! Nice work Toby!
I am definetly impressed how clearly you remember the facts and how you present them!
As I have pretty much chosen the same scenes I completely agree with you choise!

]]> Comment on Poem by munchy http://tobiasdust.wordpress.com/2008/06/08/poem/#comment-8 munchy Mon, 09 Jun 2008 19:01:52 +0000 http://tobiasdust.wordpress.com/?p=24#comment-8 Just a quick answer, will comment on the poem later. "der Pfuscher [sucht] zum Reim den Gedanken" ;-) Well, all in there, yet I changed my poem and published another one. However, I think the main problem is that I am too influenced by all your poem by now. Makes it difficult not to comment or refer to one or more of them. Also, those exam papers really make you want to write quite different poems ... Just a quick answer, will comment on the poem later.

“der Pfuscher [sucht] zum Reim den Gedanken” ;-)

Well, all in there, yet I changed my poem and published another one. However, I think the main problem is that I am too influenced by all your poem by now. Makes it difficult not to comment or refer to one or more of them.
Also, those exam papers really make you want to write quite different poems …

]]> Comment on The unkempt European by muenchganderkesee http://tobiasdust.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/15/#comment-5 muenchganderkesee Wed, 02 Apr 2008 19:21:04 +0000 http://tobiasdust.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/15/#comment-5 Really well done the biography of that Morten, I really like all that background information the readers gets on the time the situation is set in. However, as you already got two quite good comments on you contents I will quickly comment on the language. Well done, too, except for two minor mistakes: it should be "diminished memories of the World War" and later, close to the end, "Since then, I have been travelling" (remember, since is a signal word for present perfect which also makes more sense in that sentence) as well as that "nor" should be a "not" but that not really a biggie. Really well done the biography of that Morten, I really like all that background information the readers gets on the time the situation is set in. However, as you already got two quite good comments on you contents I will quickly comment on the language. Well done, too, except for two minor mistakes: it should be “diminished memories of the World War” and later, close to the end, “Since then, I have been travelling” (remember, since is a signal word for present perfect which also makes more sense in that sentence) as well as that “nor” should be a “not” but that not really a biggie.

]]> Comment on The unkempt European by stefandust http://tobiasdust.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/15/#comment-4 stefandust Wed, 02 Apr 2008 18:40:28 +0000 http://tobiasdust.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/15/#comment-4 I really enjoyed reading "your" biography. Especially the emotions were very good and the whole Beatles story. Did you make a research on the Beatles on the internet to get all those information? See you tomorrow at school! I really enjoyed reading “your” biography. Especially the emotions were very good and the whole Beatles story. Did you make a research on the Beatles on the internet to get all those information?
See you tomorrow at school!

]]> Comment on The unkempt European by Silje http://tobiasdust.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/15/#comment-3 Silje Wed, 02 Apr 2008 18:21:54 +0000 http://tobiasdust.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/15/#comment-3 Hey Trowski! I really enjoyed Mortens biography, especially the detailed description of his motivation to the journey to India ;) And the reason for the disappearance of his money really made me laugh. But, to be honest, I don't have the impression that Morten, when he wrote this biography, was as exhausted as he is presented in the novel. Nonetheless, I like the "writing-style" , when you tried to show Mortens feelings. See you tomorrow! Hey Trowski!
I really enjoyed Mortens biography, especially the detailed description of his motivation to the journey to India ;)
And the reason for the disappearance of his money really made me laugh.
But, to be honest, I don’t have the impression that Morten, when he wrote this biography, was as exhausted as he is presented in the novel.
Nonetheless, I like the “writing-style” , when you tried to show Mortens feelings.
See you tomorrow!

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